https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5ofW9S9TBI4
Here is the link to my business idea elevator pitch. This whole semester we have been working with the idea of opportunity development and identifying customer needs. As I personally have been working with this particular business idea, the elevator pitch is a key component to getting it off the ground. After the first elevator pitch I posted, I received some great feedback. One thing that I could improve on and wanted to make sure I did so in this video was the tone of my voice. In the first elevator pitch I was fluctuating my voice and it sometimes sounded unnatural. I also received feedback regarding the content of the elevator pitch. So this time around I made sure to refine the content that I was presenting and really studied up on what I wanted to say to where it wasn't memorized, rather I simply know the topic I am talking about.
Hey Brandon,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job on this elevator pitch. I went back and watched your first one again, and checked to see if you did anything different this time around. The answer was a resounding yes; I thought you showed a lot of improvement. I thought that you were able to take the feedback you got from your first pitch and really change the tides and improve on the second pitch. You were professional and confident, all while pitching your idea in the desired amount of time. Great job on the pitch and keep up the great work!
Hey Brandon!
ReplyDeleteFirst thing I have to comment on is your attire. You definitely made an effort to dress for the occasion, with a suit and a tie. Moreover, you did a great job on this assignment, I appreciated the fact that you spoke eloquently and used your hands appropriately for what you were talking about. Also, you really got your point across, you made sure to give lots of details and statistics to drive your point home.
Hey Brandon,
ReplyDeleteGreat job again with your pitch. Just as last time, professional attire can define how consumers perceive your product, and you came ready to sell, automatically enhancing the perception of you and your business. You also did well using several mannerisms and facial expressions to get your point across, another key to selling it. Only thing I would add is to hyperlink the youtube video, other than that you killed it.