Hey Brandon, I thought you did a great job on this elevator pitch. First thing that comes to mind is that you look incredibly professional; it is clear that you dressed for success. I also think that you did a great job presenting a problem that is present in our society, as well as listing a plausible solution for that problem. It was a very professional presentation that had a clear mission to end a problem and provide a good and service to society. That being said, one thing you can work on is the fact that the video did run a little long. Still excellent work!
Great Elevator Pitch. I thought your apparel really stood out during this Elevator Pitch as you took this assignment seriously and dressed in professional attire with a suit, a tie, and a dress shirt. Moreover, I thought your details were extremely concise and to the point. I appreciated the fact that you took time with your pitch and spoke in a very calm manner.
Hey Brandon, As Shenelle and Michael said, your outfit was professional which added to the overall credibility to your pitch. Often times people's first impressions are how you look and what you say, so your outfit is half the battle. In addition, your hands and mannerisms add to the overall sell of the pitch, and because of how you sold your product I would definitely be interested! Great job.
Hey Brandon,
ReplyDeleteI thought you did a great job on this elevator pitch. First thing that comes to mind is that you look incredibly professional; it is clear that you dressed for success. I also think that you did a great job presenting a problem that is present in our society, as well as listing a plausible solution for that problem. It was a very professional presentation that had a clear mission to end a problem and provide a good and service to society. That being said, one thing you can work on is the fact that the video did run a little long. Still excellent work!
Hey Brandon!
ReplyDeleteGreat Elevator Pitch. I thought your apparel really stood out during this Elevator Pitch as you took this assignment seriously and dressed in professional attire with a suit, a tie, and a dress shirt. Moreover, I thought your details were extremely concise and to the point. I appreciated the fact that you took time with your pitch and spoke in a very calm manner.
Hey Brandon,
ReplyDeleteAs Shenelle and Michael said, your outfit was professional which added to the overall credibility to your pitch. Often times people's first impressions are how you look and what you say, so your outfit is half the battle. In addition, your hands and mannerisms add to the overall sell of the pitch, and because of how you sold your product I would definitely be interested! Great job.