https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5ofW9S9TBI4&t=8s
Third time is a charm! After the second elevator pitch I was a little surprised by the feedback I received in a positive way. I have received some very positive feedback about my elevator pitches and I have also received some very valuable constructive criticism. One thing that really felt different to me this time around, was how well I felt I knew the content. At this point it feels almost memorized and it makes me feel much more comfortable in front of the camera. This elevator pitch I tried to be a little more convincing with my tone and my body language. By doing so I believe it gives a better impression to my viewers.
Hey Brandon!
ReplyDeleteAs this is your third pitch, you can definitely see the confidence and passion. You 100% have your speech down, and you seem like you are really energetic and excited about your product. I think this was one of the most defining qualities in your elevator speech. Moreover, you used hand gestures when needed, and talked in an animated fashion. You definitely did a great job.
Hey Brandon,
ReplyDeleteI thought that you did an excellent job with this pitch. I had to go back and watch your first two pitches again, and I felt that you did a great job of using the feedback you received to deliver an excellent presentation. You were comfortable and confident and those characteristics seemed to flow right through you as you promoted your service. I also liked how you used things such as hand gestures, as it made the presentation more engaging and interactive. Great job and keep up the great work!